I love it! I really really enjoyed reading this fic, it's impossible not to imagine the whole scen, as well as character's expressions and feelings ^^ The twins are cute as always, i was happy you made Zero fall for Ichiru's charming persuading even though he was angry at his brother after the forest accident <3 And yay for Yagari's soft treatment at the end too! XD
Hihi such a nice story for good night~ ^^
Good luck with fanfic contest!! >w<